It is called 'The Murder Mystery'
One dark, dusty night there was a bright beaming full moon. Jeff, a 56 year old man, was looking out the window from his old cracked house when suddenly a loud noise was heard... It was like BOOM!!CRASH!! "What was that sound?" said Jeff.
As a reader - What do you think it was?
I think it is good, I put 100% into this writing piece - if you have any things I could improve on please comment.