Rhys, I hope your main character wasn't inspired by anyone you know??? Great description of Granny Sarah - "shrivelled up as a prune."
I think I'll go with ending one - where Coliefa dies from poisoning.
By the way, what kind of fruit did the tree on the tropical island produce? Hope it was pawpaw.
Definitely enjoyed the humour!
Love the story, Rhys, and great to see it published here :-)
I hope there aren't any "dodgy" characters on the tropical island we are visiting soon!
Writing - Narrative